Week8 Contact11- D Scene 30 + OT

It's a day before the critic session, or interim 1-B where those under Ronald will sit together and show the things that they have done so far. Each will present their works, followed by feedbacks/critics or suggestions that will be given by Ronald or the rest of the group.

So i was pretty much rushed with the things that i had to prepare for the presentation tomorrow. I was working on Scene 30 and had some problem with the focal point. So i asked Vivien and some others (i think) about it. Scene 30 was in a POV of the main character when he wokes up in the hospital, to see his mother by his side and the doctor.

At that time when i asked Vivi, i told her that i found scene 30 unpleasant looking. What i mean is, when you look at it, you some what find your eye irritated and it seems to travel everywhere in the frame. Well, for such a scene, the mother should be the focal point, so while discussing, we come to a conclusion about the location of the character and such, so i edited the mothers location.

Later i asked Ronald about scene 30, (i still find it quite, "something is wrong", though it looked much better), so he figured that the mother's eye was looking at the wrong direction cos she seemed to be looking over his head, rather than looking at her son. Sooo... yup. got that fixed now. ^,....,^

*sigh.. i still got scene 2 to work with. aites.. back to work.